#1101: Little Fictions – The Uncollected Paul Halter: ‘The Celestial Thief’ (2021) and ‘The Wendigo’s Spell’ (2023) [trans. John Pugmire 2021/2023]

I’m slowly working my way up to the newly-translated Paul Halter novel The Siren’s Call (1998, tr. 2023), but there’s the small matter of these two short stories to deal with first, translated by John Pugmire and drawn here from the pages of Ellery Queen Mystery Magazine.

First, from the September/October 2021 edition, we have ‘The Celestial Thief’ (2021, tr. 2021), which finds Halter’s Victorian dilettante sleuth Owen Burns, having “just joined the septuagenarian club”, on holiday in France where a story of a mysterious vanishing reaches his ears. And this is no mere disapparation from a locked or watched room, but instead the vanishment of all the stars in the heavens — winking out before the eyes of two witnesses, who are so overcome with panic at what they’re (not) seeing that they fail to prevent a friend from being murderously attacked by, presumably, the extra-terrestrial forces responsible.

There’s an ingenious idea at the core of this, but in a way the stars vanishing is too big to be the proper focus, and Burns recalls Sherlock Holmes when he declares that “the more complex a problem appears, the simpler the solution tends to be”. The principle is intelligent, and having two people witness the same thing is achieved well, but that apparent impossibility fades into the background when trying to weave a pattern out of activities that include the mutilation of cattle and the apparent sighting of a flying saucer in the region, never mind the suicide of young woman from the town and that murderous attack upon the man who is, in a way, responsible for the impossible sight the watchers beheld.

Aliens are a tricky subject for writers of rational detective fiction, because having to explain their otherworldly activities can — as in The Case of the Little Green Men (1951) by Mack Reynolds — result in a series of damp squibs going off, or, as in ‘From Another World’ (1948) by Clayton Rawson, utilise some good ideas among a series of underwhelming ones. Halter has the intelligence to suggest one easily pooh-poohed explanation given by Burns’ Watson, Achilles Stock, and manages to find a thread through the madness that makes sense of most of the events, without resorting to cheap trickery or raising issues of how practical some of the events might be. It’s very clever.

What Halter also does, which might not be to the liking of some, is leave some elements unexplained, indeed unaddressed altogether, and I suppose it is up to the reader to determine how relevant they are to the story and how much they might just have been either scene-setting for the overall effect or whether, given the isolated setting, they’re filigree’d additions after the event made up to layer an air of mystery over something which had such an unsuspectedly rational explanation all along. I liked it, but your mileage may vary.

The May/June 2023 edition then brings us up to date with ‘The Wendigo’s Spell’ (2023, tr. 2023), which starts off with what is essentially a reminder of ‘The Oracle of the Dog’ (1926) by G.K. Chesterton and then quickly expands to include stories of the mythical wendigo, “a monster half man and half wolf…the North American equivalent of [the European] werewolf”. I was under the impression — no doubt from Rim of the Pit (1944) by Hake Talbot — that the wendigo was a flying beast, so I feel like I learned something here, trusting Halter as I do to be correct. No, I’m not going to look it up.

The story sees Dr. Alan Twist visiting a friend, also in France, and being told of the mysterious case of a man who murdered his wife one evening without provocation…a case which becomes all the more baffling when it transpires that a second man also murdered his wife in the same manner at the same time on the other side of the Atlantic Ocean. It’s a great little setup, aided by some strong scene-setting in the opening stages (“…the log fire flickering in the grate, fighting in vain against the chilly air of that late autumn…”), and doubly impressive for how it takes something fairly routine…

“If you look at the bare facts, there’s not much of a mystery…just unbridled jealousy and anger…”

…and spins it into the borderlands of pure madness.

In appreciating the solution, and I do very much appreciate it, I think a certain awareness of Halter’s recent works helps, as he has put more of a foot over the line into metaphysical matters in recent years. ‘The Yellow Book’ (2017, tr. 2017) and The Gold Watch (2019, tr. 2019) have both toyed with the principle raised here, and, while it won’t be to everyone’s liking, I thoroughly enjoyed Halter’s attempt to write what’s almost in the same wheelhouse as The Burning Court (1937) by John Dickson Carr. There’s a real confidence in the blending of genres, supported by the clever stirring in of early details to strengthen the edifice, that speaks of genuine skill rather than lazily reaching for an easy way out of the difficulty he has created.

These two stories together show that, after 35 years as an author, Paul Halter still has some ingenious ideas up his sleeves. The confidence that comes from not needing to tie off every single incident, to leave some of it up in the air without that affecting the essential shape of the core impossibility, is lovely to see, and something I hope he embraces if he has any more fiction in him. Halter’s proven to be divisive with English-language audiences — what author hasn’t? — but if this betokened a new phase in his career, I for one would find that very exciting…

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Paul Halter reviews on The Invisible Event; all translations by John Pugmire unless stated

Featuring Dr. Alan Twist and Archibald Hurst:

The Fourth Door (1987) [trans. 1999]
Death Invites You (1988) [trans. 2015]
The Madman’s Room (1990) [trans. 2017]
The Seventh Hypothesis (1991) [trans. 2012]
The Tiger’s Head (1991) [trans. 2013]
The Demon of Dartmoor (1993) [trans. 2012]
The Picture from the Past (1995) [trans. 2014]
The Vampire Tree (1996) [trans. 2016]
The Siren’s Call (1998) [trans. 2023]
The Man Who Loved Clouds (1999) [trans. 2018]
Penelope’s Web (2001) [trans. 2021]

Featuring Owen Burns and Achilles Stock:

The Lord of Misrule (1994) [trans. 2006]
The Seven Wonders of Crime (1997) [trans. 2005]
The Phantom Passage (2005) [trans. 2015]
The Mask of the Vampire (2014) [trans. 2022]
The Gold Watch (2019) [trans. 2019]

Standalones:

The Crimson Fog (1988) [trans. 2013]
The Invisible Circle (1996) [trans. 2014]

Collected short stories:

The Night of the Wolf (2000) [trans. 2004 w’ Adey]

Individual short stories [* = collected in the anthology The Helm of Hades (2019)]:

‘Nausicaa’s Ball’ (2004) [trans. 2008 w’ Adey]*
‘The Robber’s Grave’ (2007) [trans. 2007 w’ Adey]*
‘The Gong of Doom’ (2010) [trans. 2010]*
‘The Man with the Face of Clay’ (2011) [trans. 2012]*
‘Jacob’s Ladder’ (2014) [trans. 2014]*
‘The Wolf of Fenrir’ (2014) [trans. 2015]*
‘The Scarecrow’s Revenge’ (2015) [trans. 2016]*
‘The Fires of Hell’ (2016) [trans. 2016]*
‘The Yellow Book’ (2017) [trans. 2017]*
‘The Helm of Hades’ (2019) [trans. 2019]*
‘The Celestial Thief’ (2021) [trans. 2021]
‘The Wendigo’s Spell’ (2023) [trans. 2023]

10 thoughts on “#1101: Little Fictions – The Uncollected Paul Halter: ‘The Celestial Thief’ (2021) and ‘The Wendigo’s Spell’ (2023) [trans. John Pugmire 2021/2023]

  1. I have only read a handful of his novels but found them all ingenious but a but synthetic – but these two sound like very well-managed. I’m wondering if the short stories might suit me better
    Any idea if these are like to be collected? Thanks Jim.

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    • I’m not Jim but considering his other Ellery Queen stories were collected in Helm of Hades, I’m guessing these will be too—but not until Halter writes eight more stories to fill out a collection. Though maybe if Pugmire puts in some of his other untranslated work it could come out sooner.

      I’m a bit annoyed that I missed out on “The Celestial Thief” since it might be years till it gets republished, but OH WELL. If you haven’t tried his short stories yet, I think Night of the Wolf is the better collection.

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  2. You seem to like both stories. If you were to give each a “star rating” as you do with your reviews of novels, what would you give each please? Normally I find if you like something, it works for me. Thank you.

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    • I’d probably give ‘The Celestial Thief’ 3.5 stars and ‘The Wendigo’s Spell’ 4 stars, for what it’s worth.

      To compare this to other Halter stories, I’d give 5 stars to ‘The Night of the Wolf’, ‘The Cleaver’, ‘The Yellow Book’ and maybe ‘The Golden Ghost’.

      In fact, hang on, I ranked the short stories a little while ago; you can find that here.

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    • Were it up to me, he’d be on the front of every issue to feature him…but then I, like you, am not exactly hot on who’s hot in modern crime writing.

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  3. I read “The Wendigo’s Spell” based on your recommendation. Books and short stories that weave an alleged supernatural element (even it if ends up being de-bunked) with the mystery always fascinate me. Halter did a good job creating a creepy atmosphere with a supernatural backdrop. Nevertheless, Dr. Twist gives a rational solution for which I could kick myself for not spotting. Excellent story.

    P.S. I had never heard of a Wendigo so did some checking. Most of Halter’s interpretation is consistent with the legend … albeit it is not necessarily a half-man / half-wolf entity (i.e., werewolf) as Dr. Twist precisely describes.

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    • There’s some exceptionally clever stuff in there, I agree. Halter really does excel in the best of his short fiction, and seeing hin still plot so strongly after so many years is very exciting.

      I figured he was right about the wendigo, but it’s interesting that my impression was that it was a flying beast. I checked Rim of the Pit and it’s definitely from there that I got this…so clearly Hake Talbot isn’t to be trusted 😉

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