#492: Adventures in Self-Publishing – Where’s the Beef? (2014) by Deb Pines

where's the beef

I thought it would be nice to mix things up in these Adventures in Self-Publishing with a gentle disappearance story.  Little did I anticipate the red hot Scrabble action we’d get along the way.

Where’s the Beef? (2014) is a between-books short novella from Deb Pines’ Chautauqua Mystery series and features 50-something journalist Mimi Goldman, who has returned to Chautauqua after 16 years to work for the local paper.  Having apparently solved a mystery in book 1, she is approached by the owners of the local hotel The Rosebriar when it transpires weekly deliveries of meat have gone missing from the hotel kitchen.  The delivery boy claims to have delivered it and locked the door after himself when he left, but within an hour there is no sign of the delivery anywhere in the kitchen, and with no access to the room it’s a mystery how it could have vanished.

As mysteries go, this one has several problems.  Overlooking that this story is so short it doesn’t begin until 12% of the way into the book, the solution here — and I’ll not go into precise details — is one that relies on the proximity of things to other things, and there is no way from reading this even with minute care you’d deduce the relative proximity of any of the relevant objects.  Deb Pines is very good at detailing the thoughts and feelings of Mimi, but when it comes to describing space her writing becomes so indistinct that it sort of beggars belief.

To the left, was a wall with a stainless steel counter, the biggest workspace.  Two sinks.  A dishwasher.  A fire extinguisher.  A pantry with labelled plastic jars.

About eight feet up, along the same wall — that was probably the Rosebriar’s original exterior wall — was a row of one-foot-by-one-foot transom windows.

To the right, were a double-wide cooking stove with six burners, a pantry of food, a refrigerator freezer and what looked like another door.

There’s a piece of information in the above description that would solve the whole thing for even the most basic intellect in a jiffy.  The delivery boy comes in, leaves the meat on the stainless steel counter, leaves.  Hidden passageways, dumb waiters, all the old tricks are ruled out, and yet someone makes the meat disappear — it’s a mystery only because you’re not told something you should be told, but my main question is this: even if the meat hadn’t been snatched off the counter three weeks out of the last four, why in the hell isn’t it being left in the fridge?  It’s raw meat, and surely just leaving it out on the side for an hour is violating all manner of food hygiene standards.  No wonder they’re getting unhappy reviews on TripAdvisor.

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“I…I don’t feel well…”

I can’t deny that there’s a neat piece of reasoning used to justify Mimi’s solution to the mystery, one of those ‘absence of a thing’ solutions that can work very well indeed, but given the complete absence of need for said mystery, and the fact that the reader is given no chance to see how any of it fits together, I suppose this is crime fiction for people who just like being told things.  It’s not as outright cutesy-cozy as The Locked Room Murder (2016) from a few weeks back, but it exists in that same strata of fiction for people who say “Do you know any good riddles?” and when you give them one immediately go “So what’s the answer?”.  And fine, there are a lot of them out there, but they’re awful people and shouldn’t be encouraged.

Relax, relax, I jest…slightly.

However, the focus in this short story is very clearly not the problem in the title, as it seems much more interested in being a sort of tourist guide to Chautauqua and providing the incomprehensible Scrabble action promised up top.  We’ll get to the Scrabble, always put the most compelling bit last, but let’s look at Chautauqua first:

A year-round population of around 400 swells to more than 100,000 people attending events during the season.

Events, you wonder?  What events?  What sort of events?  Well, you’d be interested to know that…

[Chautauqua] began in 1874 as a tent retreat for Methodist Sunday school teachers and evolved into a gated community with a nine week summer season of lectures, concerts, religious services and other cultural and recreational activities.

Additionally, be sure not to miss the…

…mini Swiss chalet that Chautauqua co-founder Lewis Miller built in time to entertain President Ulysses S. Grant, one of nine U.S. presidents to visit Chautauqua.

And if you visit at the start of August, you can take place in…

Chautauqua’s annual Old First Night Run/Walk/Swim.

The 2.7-mile race commemorating Chautauqua’s birthday could be run or walked, as usual, on the grounds on August 3.

In a full novel, these public announcements on behalf of the Chautauqua Tourist Board might not appear so intrusive, but the first 12% of this book is title pages and copyrights, so give me some actual plot.  If I want to learn about the…

…amazing 18-mile grey-green carpet, about a mile wide in most parts, stretching between Jamestown and Mayville, New York…

…then I’ll…huh, actually that does sounds quite pleasant.

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“Fight it, Jim!”

Yeah, sorry.  Don’t know what came over me there.  And so to Scrabble…

Mimi answers an advert in the paper for some lonely, friendless soul looking for someone to play Scrabble with.  Now, of course, you’ll be unsurprised to learn that he is:

…and attractive forty-something man with thick salt-and-pepper hair, blue eyes, a lean runner’s build and an adorable smile.

The Scrabble action is hot and heavy, so I hope you’re not reading this at work.  Open a window, make yourself comfortable, it’s about to begin:

In picking tiles to see who’d go first, Walt got a “C”, Mimi an “L.” So Walt went first.

He opened with a respectable twenty points for playing the word M-I-N-E-R.  Then he excused himself to put the burgers on the grill, flip them and add cheese.

After Mimi played F-A-D that also spelled M-A and I-D, vertically (for 18 points), the burgers were done.  So they took a break to eat.

I apologise for making things so raunchy, but, woof, you can understand my excitement.  In a story whose title is derived from the impossible crime about which it is astoundingly vague, we now have a positive surfeit of detail on matters so staggeringly trivial that it’s almost like I just made this up myself.  And worst of all, it’s mostly incorrect.

Firstly, there’s no way in hell that MINER scores 20 points.  The first word must go across the central square of the board, so with MINER being horizontal (since MA and ID are vertical) the best you can get is a double letter score for the 3-point M and everything else is worth 1 point: 6 + 1 + 1 + 1 + 1 = 10 points.  And it has to be like that for Mimi to get 18 points on her go with a double-letter F.  Yes, I’m typing this with my Scrabble board next to me.  I am furious. [EDIT: it also turns out I’m wrong — the central square that the first word must cross counts as a double-word score, and I had no idea, I apologise]

Secondly, how long does it take Mimi to put down FAD?!  Walt gets up to turn the burgers, she puts down three tiles, and the burgers are done??  Like, does no-one in this fucking settlement know how to store or cook meat?  The fact that these two are apparently in need of a break after playing two whole words of Scrabble is perhaps a hint that they’re not the sharpest, but there’s no indication of stomach cramps or any other problem from this undercooked meat they’re wilfully chugging down — this book is a public menace.

However, back to the game.

She picked an I, N and G.  Along with her stockpiled blank and S, she had the perfect building blocks for a seven-letter word that, in Scrabble, comes with a 50-point bonus.

At her next turn, Mimi played V-I-E for a mealy seven points to dump the V.

Up to this point, we’ve been told the precise words they make, but suddenly she plays VIE which is a six-point word for seven points and so there must be another letter in that word (because that’s how Scrabble works, though this is one of the few rules not — ahem — spelled out to us).  Suddenly we get all coy — going PG where previously it’s been X-rated word action — and we’re left hanging.  Would V-I-N-E veer too pronographically into the real story here?  Also, what happened to that seven letter word?  She’s got the “perfect building blocks”, but since you only have seven letters at a time in Scrabble she’s clearly got S, I, N, G, V, E, and __ in front of her — look at those letters: what seven-letter word does she have?  And, hell, if you just dismiss three of your letters don’t you always have the perfect base for a seven-letter word? S, N, G, and __.  Singing?  Sighing? Gastro-?  We never find out what that seven letter word would have been, but I’m calling bullshit anyway.

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“Snogger?”

You say I’m getting distracted?  Well, this is very distracting. However, this is the second game they play in the book — oho, you thought there’s be just one extended scene of heavy-breathing wordplay non-flirting? —  and the coup de grace of the entire thing actually comes in the first game, where Mimi must vie (Ithankyou) for Walt’s attention with another woman called Evvy (a younger woman, no less, the hussy) and a point is made of how seriously Walt and Mimi take their Scrabble.  And it ends with this gorgeous moment:

Near the end of what was a close game between Walt and Mimi, Evvy ended up turning the tide.  She opened up a triple-word opportunity.  And Walt, seizing the opportunity, played Q-U-I-N-C-E for a game-winning 62 points.

Now.  Firstly 62 is not a multiple of 3, which a score from a triple-word opportunity would have to be.  Secondly, with that word on any triple-word square (around the edges of the board) the best you could do is 17 points +1 for a double-letter score on one of the 1-point letters, a total of 18 points, which with a triple word score gets you 18 × 3 = 54 points.  Therefore, we can only conclude that Walt’s “game-winning 62 points” is his total score for the whole game, and that he had scored a mere 8 points in the rest of the game prior to this.  And that Mimi had done about the same (it was, after all, “a close game between Walt and Mimi”).  And Evvy, god help her, had done worse.

These people deserve to be poisoned by their undercooked meat.  And I never want to hear of Chautauqua ever again.

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Previous Adventures in Self-Publishing can be found here.

14 thoughts on “#492: Adventures in Self-Publishing – Where’s the Beef? (2014) by Deb Pines

  1. Sorry to hear it was a bit 1-4-1-1. Defending that final move though, isn’t it possible that the word was positioned to be adjacent to another word so that you count the new vertical words as well towards the point total? I mean, it’s unlikely given all of the other questionable aspects of the game but then again is it even possible to win with so few points?

    Shame really that Deb Pines didn’t detail the game more fully… 😉

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    • Ha. I have a feeling this may have just been a game of flirty Scrabble until it was decided to be a bit of a risk genre-wise and thus a hasty, unfairly-clewed mystery was tagged on.

      I’m curious to see if there’s even more Scrabble in the books that follow this…but, well, I have no desire to pay for or read them. So if anyone knows, please fill us in!

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  2. What a pity this is such a mess of a story, because meat disappearing from a locked hotel kitchen is a new one to me. Oh, well, they can’t all be a James Scott Byrnside or Lee Sheldon.

    Just out of curiosity… the theft of raw meat left on the counter suggests the work of an animal. Was an animal, entering and leaving through one of the transoms, at work here? Although you said the solution hinges on the “absence of a thing.” So maybe the thief put an arm through one of the transoms and scooped up the meat with a pole-like object from the kitchen, but no idea what that could be. This would explain why the meat had to be left on the counter or else the trick wouldn’t work.

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    • SPOILERS
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      Gold star, go straight to the head of the class! Frustratingly, it’s never revealed that that transom windows are opened (or even openable — what kind of detective doesn’t ask that?!) because, I guess, that kills the illusions. But, yeah, there’s a small dog that jumps through the transom from a pile of newspapers on the table outside the door (not that you know the table is close enough to allow this…). One week, the papers are not there — that’s the “absence of a thing” — and so it would not have had the extra height to jump from, hence the meat remains untouched.

      It’s almost like you’ve read some of these impossible crime stories before or something…

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  3. Credit for reading this crap and producing a laugh out loud review. Greater love hath no man etc for laying his brain aside for a hour or so to read this and come up with a great blog post. Chapeau ! As I believe the young people say.

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    • Deighted to hear that you enjoyed reading about it — thank-you! I’m determined to get enjoyment out of a thing if I can without being too much of an arse about it, and the surfeit of Scrabble detail coupled with a complete lack of interest in how the scoring works was something that started out frustrating me and just became funnier the longer it went on.

      Chautauqua does sound lovely, though, so the Tourit Board can consider their grant well-spent.

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  4. You would make a great fact checker. What reader would take the time to figure out if the writer was properly scoring the points in a fictional Scrabble game? Who really cares? It’s only made up! But in your rant you overlook a very simple solution to one of the many things that angered you.

    Using your logic about what Mimi has in her rack (V I N G S E blank) by placing all seven tiles and using the R in MINER she can indeed use all seven letters and create a word: SEV[E]RING

    Mystery solved. The author misexplained the 50 bonus points. You get the bonus points for using all seven tiles in your rack, not for spelling a seven letter word. The word usually tends to be longer than seven letters because you have to use at least one letter already on the board in order to place all seven tiles.

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    • Ha, thank-you. I’ve done some proof-reading for publication, and one gets to dwell on these details. it feels good to get some pendantry out of my system once in a while, especially when such incorrect detail is lavished upon a manuscript.

      As for S E V E [R] I N G, I’d cimpletely agree with you if she didn’t play V-I-E as she says…so therefore isn’t left with those letter she claims. That’s my frustration — who says “I’ve got a basis here for a seven-letter word” by simply ignoring three of the letters? If you give most people a random selection of four letters I’m betting they could find a seven-letter word that contained them all.

      Man, this is not what anyone expected the conversation about an impossible crime tale to be. Life comes at you fast…

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  5. Sorry to be pedantic, but if the M of MINER is on a double letter score, the R ends on the central double word score which would be ((3×2)+1+1+1+1) x 2 = 20. I don’t think you needed to worry so much about spoiling this for anyone though!

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    • Well, hell — I had no idea the central square counted as a double word score, but I’ve checked my rules and it is. Goddamn.

      That seems an unfair advantage to whoever goes first, but more importantly I’ve been playing Scrabble incorrectly my whole life! John, I am indebted to you for pointing this out, I must now go and re-evaluate my priorities.

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      • Glad to be of service. I agree that it is rather unfair – first player can play their longest word, without worrying about whether it can join onto someone else’s, and gets a double as well.

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    • Rob, I know, I know — I’m just as confused, scared, bewildered, discomfited, and angry as you are. There should have been public service announcements about this, or at least a Bruce Willis movie in the mid-90s. How else were we supposed to know? Sure, we could have read “the rules” but, dude, we’re not squares. We’re the cool Scrabble kids, someone should’ve known to tell us.

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